Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Adding detail to sentences

Adding detail to sentences is really really cool because you can learn better and you can be clever.
Today we learned how to add detail to the front of the sentence and to the back, we had to add great beginnings to the front and great detailed endings to the back.

1. The man who invented the spaceship was Jack.
2. The alien invented the spaceship to fly to mars.
3. The space monkey invented the spaceship so he can be better at flying it.

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