Tuesday, October 16, 2012

The story about Josh

This narrative is about a boy named Josh. He lives in America, and his country had flooded. When it rains the flood rises. It is threatening. Josh was so naughty, he sneaked outside without his mum knowing.

While his nana was moving furniture to higher ground, with his mother. Josh had thought of making a bet for him to jump into the flood, to see if he could touch the bottom. So he went and made his bet.

With a huge SPLASH!!!!! He had disappeared. “Josh.....  Josh”. Shouted his mother. “ Oh Josh where are you”. She kept shouting. Josh’s friends were starting to get worried. “ He’s been down there for quite a while”. Jason exclaimed. “ I’m going down to get him”. Jason said.

By then Josh had hit his head on a building and had sunk. Jason was just in time to catch him before he hit the rock. Josh was sent to Hospital with his Mum. In the end Josh had a serious head injury.

He was lucky to have had his mother there to help him. Poor old Josh. Jason is a hero.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Mary,
    WOW! I really enjoyed reading this blog post. It hooked me in. Lucky Josh had an awesome mum and friends. This was a cool narrative. I can't wait to read more interesting post. Keep up the great work!