Friday, November 1, 2013

Show Not Tell In A Paragraph

WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.

While watching the sunset I thought to myself, 'We should go Trick or Treating now'. My friends agreed with me. Off we went. Light shoes lifted of the ground while walking towards a house. I saw a boy with a, Pointy hat, A black dress, Some black shoes, A pointy nose, And a brownish broom stick. I had soon recognised it was a Witch.

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